Awww . . . Now this is the type of romance I like! Nothin' sappy about it. It's actually romantic. More people need to learn what that is.
I can just hear Hagard Hagan (my English teacher) wailing now at all these amazingly long sentences. Faulkner would be proud. LOL I totally dig them, as I love that stream-of-consciousness style. It worked rather well, definitely encourage you to do more writing like that. >3 It all flowed really well and the choice of words was great. Though there were a few here and there that even I, the Queen of Verbage, found somewhat wordy. But you definitely pulled it off well.
My faves, strangely enough, were actually rather short. #2 and #42 were my faves hands down. Both really captured the moment and I got the best, clearest mental image with those two.
I need to do one of these, or one like it. >3 Hooray for meds~ I can hardly give anything constructive. LOL
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I can just hear Hagard Hagan (my English teacher) wailing now at all these amazingly long sentences. Faulkner would be proud. LOL I totally dig them, as I love that stream-of-consciousness style. It worked rather well, definitely encourage you to do more writing like that. >3 It all flowed really well and the choice of words was great. Though there were a few here and there that even I, the Queen of Verbage, found somewhat wordy. But you definitely pulled it off well.
My faves, strangely enough, were actually rather short. #2 and #42 were my faves hands down. Both really captured the moment and I got the best, clearest mental image with those two.
I need to do one of these, or one like it. >3 Hooray for meds~ I can hardly give anything constructive. LOL