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Lucky_Ladybug ([personal profile] ladybug_archive) wrote2009-07-22 10:39 am

Fic Musings

Jeff has made his intro in the fic! He is indeed a punk with leather and piercings, because the idea amused me too much.

This Jeff has problems with his uncle, too. ;___; Aaron Gordon believes that Jeff actually stole what he was framed for stealing. So ... there may be some h/c later on, with Jeff trying to help the others fight the double. And probably getting hurt. Then his uncle would come and maybe finally remember things as they really are while seeing Jeff laying there.

Gotta decide what the rest of chapter 4 is. Probably the double fully putting his plans into action. He's having way too much fun playing Drosselmeyer and controlling the characters in his world. ;___;

Scott and El need to meet Double Trouble too, but that probably won't be till later.

[identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:09 am (UTC)(link)
Yikes @ the piercings! That's gotta hurt. XD; I'll bet he looks pretty cool in the jacket, though. >3 **can't wait to see it!**

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
Jeff's going to be pretty horrified when he remembers everything and then realizes he has all these piercings. XD; I guess the ear ones could close up if he took the earrings out, but would the nose ones close too? **debating whether the piercings should be an illusion caused by the double.**

X3

[identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
XD; I would guess they would, since the nose and ear are made of the same stuff, but I'm really not sure. XD; Maybe they should just be an illusion! Was everything supposed to be real in the first place?

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
Everything is real, but their memories are fake. XD In other words, El is really at the real college, Scott was really in Tokyo.... Everyone is under the double's spell, in the world he created.

[identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:45 am (UTC)(link)
Oh wow. o.o The double must've really messed with a lot of people's memories!

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
Yeeep. XD He pretty much cast a spell over the whole world. LOL.

[identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
LOL. Wow. He's certainly learned quite a bit during all the years he's been dead. XD

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 05:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yep. LOL. But then he finds out that his spell wasn't as strong as he'd hoped. X3

[identity profile] cskazaam.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
X3 I guess that's what happens when you try to kidnap a whole planet! XD

....LOL, that makes it sound like he should work for Carmen. XD

[identity profile] insaneladybug.livejournal.com 2009-07-25 05:17 am (UTC)(link)
Yep. XD

LOL! That would be scary. XD