Fic Musings

[ladybug_archive]

Jeff has made his intro in the fic! He is indeed a punk with leather and piercings, because the idea amused me too much.

This Jeff has problems with his uncle, too. ;___; Aaron Gordon believes that Jeff actually stole what he was framed for stealing. So ... there may be some h/c later on, with Jeff trying to help the others fight the double. And probably getting hurt. Then his uncle would come and maybe finally remember things as they really are while seeing Jeff laying there.

Gotta decide what the rest of chapter 4 is. Probably the double fully putting his plans into action. He's having way too much fun playing Drosselmeyer and controlling the characters in his world. ;___;

Scott and El need to meet Double Trouble too, but that probably won't be till later.

Comments

[rose-of-pollux.livejournal.com]

Yay Jeff!

Aww, but that's so sad that his uncle won't believe him! ;___; **hugs him**

**and yells a few more Haddockisms at the doppelganger**

**hugs Scott and El**

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

X3

;____; His uncle will definitely regret it, even before he remembers.

**hugs them too.**

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

LOL @ Jeff. You should do a picture of him! X3 ....I'm actually imagining him wearing something similar to the old Rockapella jackets. XD

Awww, poor Jeff! ;___; Oooh, that sounds like it would be such an intense scene!

;___; Poor guys! And they don't even know it....

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

I have, actually. X3 It needs some touch-up work, though. **might actually color it, since Jeff's hair isn't as complex as some of the others'.** He has two noserings in his left nostril **shudders to think of it. Ow!** and three earrings in his left ear. He has two more earrings in his right ear, but that didn't show. XD; And he's wearing a standard James Dean/Grease leather jacket.

;___;

Totally!

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

Yikes @ the piercings! That's gotta hurt. XD; I'll bet he looks pretty cool in the jacket, though. >3 **can't wait to see it!**

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Jeff's going to be pretty horrified when he remembers everything and then realizes he has all these piercings. XD; I guess the ear ones could close up if he took the earrings out, but would the nose ones close too? **debating whether the piercings should be an illusion caused by the double.**

X3

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

XD; I would guess they would, since the nose and ear are made of the same stuff, but I'm really not sure. XD; Maybe they should just be an illusion! Was everything supposed to be real in the first place?

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Everything is real, but their memories are fake. XD In other words, El is really at the real college, Scott was really in Tokyo.... Everyone is under the double's spell, in the world he created.

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

Oh wow. o.o The double must've really messed with a lot of people's memories!

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Yeeep. XD He pretty much cast a spell over the whole world. LOL.

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

LOL. Wow. He's certainly learned quite a bit during all the years he's been dead. XD

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Yep. LOL. But then he finds out that his spell wasn't as strong as he'd hoped. X3

[cskazaam.livejournal.com]

X3 I guess that's what happens when you try to kidnap a whole planet! XD

....LOL, that makes it sound like he should work for Carmen. XD

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Yep. XD

LOL! That would be scary. XD