Sounds about like why I've had trouble the last couple days. XD Though I've also felt sickly (more than usual) as well.
The Kaitou Kid and all that sounds so familiar. XD I wish they still played that show on Cartoon Network.
I liked this half even more than the first. >3 There was a bit more detail into it, though it's a little different when doing a story in first person. It depends how observant the person telling the story is. . . . It'd be a nightmare if I wrote myself as the narrator. LOL You'd get a paragraph just on the bumps and discolorations and whatnot about the paint on the wall nearest to me. XD;
The fact that this is left open to either that all being a dream or that later on they found him somehow makes this increadibly appealing. That or if you wanna be really twisted and say the second half is the dream or something of the sort. And the slight hints of affection Baby Face shows for Ruby are beyond kawaii. X3
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Date: 2006-07-06 02:08 pm (UTC)The Kaitou Kid and all that sounds so familiar. XD I wish they still played that show on Cartoon Network.
I liked this half even more than the first. >3 There was a bit more detail into it, though it's a little different when doing a story in first person. It depends how observant the person telling the story is. . . . It'd be a nightmare if I wrote myself as the narrator. LOL You'd get a paragraph just on the bumps and discolorations and whatnot about the paint on the wall nearest to me. XD;
The fact that this is left open to either that all being a dream or that later on they found him somehow makes this increadibly appealing. That or if you wanna be really twisted and say the second half is the dream or something of the sort. And the slight hints of affection Baby Face shows for Ruby are beyond kawaii. X3