It's kind of annoying when it takes posting something to fully realize what's wrong with it. I guess it's the same principle that states that you won't know what's wrong with a picture you've drawn until you've scanned it in and have it on the computer screen. That happens to me so many times.
It's been nagging at me that I need another scene in my crossover fic between the church and the final confrontation, but I didn't know how to work it. But now, finally, I know how to do it. Hence, I've just split the chapter up. The last scene is being moved to chapter 7, along with the new scene and the epilogue. I'm not sure when I'll be done tinkering with it, however. Due to the new scene, there's a new angle I want to work in, and that may take a while to sort out. But hopefully not, since I don't know how many people read the original chapter 6 and I'm anxious to hurry and post chapter 7 so they can see what's going on.
There's a slight chance I may add some more to chapter 6, too, but since I'm not sure about that I hurried and split it up now before anyone else reads the original version.
It's been nagging at me that I need another scene in my crossover fic between the church and the final confrontation, but I didn't know how to work it. But now, finally, I know how to do it. Hence, I've just split the chapter up. The last scene is being moved to chapter 7, along with the new scene and the epilogue. I'm not sure when I'll be done tinkering with it, however. Due to the new scene, there's a new angle I want to work in, and that may take a while to sort out. But hopefully not, since I don't know how many people read the original chapter 6 and I'm anxious to hurry and post chapter 7 so they can see what's going on.
There's a slight chance I may add some more to chapter 6, too, but since I'm not sure about that I hurried and split it up now before anyone else reads the original version.