The pschological part of this blurb is definitely its best merit. ^^ The details of it are very good, and it DOES make you think, so overall you've done really, really well! Its a very nice read.
It would do better as part of a story though, and for some reason, I'd like to see more of it. X3
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Date: 2005-12-16 11:27 am (UTC)It would do better as part of a story though, and for some reason, I'd like to see more of it. X3