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From chapter 4 and chapter 8, respectively. As always, clicking on them makes them bigger.
I randomly read over my DuckTales story Run for Your Life, which, in spite of being seven years old, I still found pretty good. It needed a little more explanation and could have been longer, but as far as it went I think it turned out well. Maybe I'll revise it some time.
I also read over my last attempt at a Darkwing fic, Dust in the Wind. It was supposed to be multi-chapter, but my inspiration had died before even posting what I did of it. I had been hoping that inspiration would return when people reviewed, but that didn't happen. XD; Reading it over now, I am horrified to discover that I created an OC sniper called Jun to be the villain ... and I remember nothing of what I intended for said Jun. If I want to pick up the story again, I'll have to start from scratch. Unless I possibly could have pitched some ideas for Jun to someone whom I was talking to about the fic.... **will have to look over some old chats from around that time.**
Does anyone besides me think Glomgold acted out of character in the final episode of DuckTales, Attack of the Metal Mites? I mean, I know he wants to be better than Scrooge and that he'd like to pretty much leave Scrooge with nothing, but from what I remember of the episode, his attack in that episode was completely unprovoked: they weren't warring over a business deal or some other competition, but he just randomly decided to have Scrooge's fortune eaten by the metal mite thingies. Or am I remembering wrong and there was something that provoked Glomgold into doing that? In any case, I dunno ... he kinda seemed like he'd gone off the deep end in that episode. Especially when he jumped up and down and waved little flags around and cheered on the metal mites. WHUT.
I actually worked some on the next chapter of Bend and Break. X3 I got a first scene done, though it might be expanded later, and I'm in the middle of a second scene. This story is hard to write because it's so sad, but I also really want to be able to tell it. It kinda explores the darker side of KH, with the really creepy Nobody and Heartless stuff. And while Seph's being tortured, there's the flashback scenes showing what happened with Lucrecia and Hojo (EDIT: showing before Seph was born and right after, in case there's any confusion. So it's over thirty years ago). I'm thinking maybe he'll find Lucrecia's journal or something, possibly at his old house. Maybe she left it with him because she wanted Hojo's atrocities to be known, and Seph's adopted parents kept it.
I'm trying to debate now on whether I should have a KH Vincent in the flashbacks or if that would only complicate matters and my timeline in general. If I do bring him in, I'm not sure he'll turn up in the present time. I'd leave it open with Seph and the others wondering what could have happened to him. But I dunno if I wanna bring one in at all. Thoughts?
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:12 am (UTC)That would be neat if you could find the sketch!^^
Hmm... I'm kinda thinking it would be nice to have Lucrecia by herself. She might appear to be stronger if it was just up to her to defy Hojo, without Vincent. And it would make it more different from FF7, which I think would be cool.^^ Maybe it's just me, but I kinda don't think there's room for Vincent. XD; It doesn't seem like he'd add much to the story, unless you were planning on bringing him in later.
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Date: 2008-06-20 03:15 am (UTC)