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Sep. 30th, 2006 08:12 amFor the past few days I've been tinkering with this. XD Another thing based off of the RP, only this is the twist we actually ended up doing, with a few different things thrown in by me.
**drops to knees.** I would very much like people's opinions on what I should do for the ending of Breakdown! Is the original ending blurb that I posted the best way to do it? Is the one where Gin has to revive Vodka the preference? What about what I'm posting now? Or should I take a little bit from different things and mix? You know, I was considering a fourth thing: just incorporating the part with Gin rescuing Vodka from the gang and leaving out all the snow stuff, instead going into more or less the conversation from the original first draft ending.... What I'm afraid of is that throwing in any amount of action near the ending is anti-climatic, but on the other hand, I think it might be good for Gin to have to take care of Vodka for a little bit.
( Say It If It's Worth Savin' Me )
**drops to knees.** I would very much like people's opinions on what I should do for the ending of Breakdown! Is the original ending blurb that I posted the best way to do it? Is the one where Gin has to revive Vodka the preference? What about what I'm posting now? Or should I take a little bit from different things and mix? You know, I was considering a fourth thing: just incorporating the part with Gin rescuing Vodka from the gang and leaving out all the snow stuff, instead going into more or less the conversation from the original first draft ending.... What I'm afraid of is that throwing in any amount of action near the ending is anti-climatic, but on the other hand, I think it might be good for Gin to have to take care of Vodka for a little bit.
( Say It If It's Worth Savin' Me )
