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Bleh. XD; Chapter 6 should need another scene, but it seems to want to think it's done right now. **headdesk.**
It's been a fun fic to write. X3 There are some angsty undertones, like in chapter 6, but mostly it's stayed in a lighter, h/c-only direction. It will get a bit darker near the climax, I suppose....
There is something in a darker direction I've been wanting to tinker with, but I'm not sure when I'll get to it. Anyone remember the AU world that Seph conquered and ruled supreme from, in a couple of blurbs/summarized entries? Well, he's still the president in that world, sane again and trying to repair his earlier damage. And the detectives are part of his security force. In the RP where they're featured, Scott was hurt during a rebel attack and doesn't remember anything (including his friends). The experience traumatized him so much that he blocked it all out. And he follows Elliott around, terrified that something's going to happen to him, even though he doesn't consciously remember El. ;___; I've been thinking of maybe writing some blurbs showing them and how they're trying to cope with this.
Recently in the RP, Elliott was shot by a laser gun during another attack, fulfilling Scott's worst fears. So another blurb would focus on those events and what happens following. (Scott fighting off the creep and saving El's life, but refusing to talk or to leave El's side while they wait to see if he'll recover. Scott still doesn't remember things, either.)
It's been a fun fic to write. X3 There are some angsty undertones, like in chapter 6, but mostly it's stayed in a lighter, h/c-only direction. It will get a bit darker near the climax, I suppose....
There is something in a darker direction I've been wanting to tinker with, but I'm not sure when I'll get to it. Anyone remember the AU world that Seph conquered and ruled supreme from, in a couple of blurbs/summarized entries? Well, he's still the president in that world, sane again and trying to repair his earlier damage. And the detectives are part of his security force. In the RP where they're featured, Scott was hurt during a rebel attack and doesn't remember anything (including his friends). The experience traumatized him so much that he blocked it all out. And he follows Elliott around, terrified that something's going to happen to him, even though he doesn't consciously remember El. ;___; I've been thinking of maybe writing some blurbs showing them and how they're trying to cope with this.
Recently in the RP, Elliott was shot by a laser gun during another attack, fulfilling Scott's worst fears. So another blurb would focus on those events and what happens following. (Scott fighting off the creep and saving El's life, but refusing to talk or to leave El's side while they wait to see if he'll recover. Scott still doesn't remember things, either.)
Re: I'm warning you, you get me on a roll and I'll never stop talking XD
Date: 2009-08-10 03:11 pm (UTC)Poor self-hating Sephs. ;___;
Yep, definitely. And LOL @ the wing thoughts! FF = defying physics since 1988. (Was that when the first one came out?)Yep. LOL. They all loved it, but Mikey even moreso.
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Date: 2009-08-10 03:31 pm (UTC)LOL. *goes to check* 1987, according to Wikipedia. 22 years of puzzling physics and strangely cooperative gravity.XD It was always gone within seconds.