Well, there it goes....

[ladybug_archive]

I overhauled chapter 1. It spilled into chapter 2. Now to see if people like the changes/update, dislike them, or are indifferent. I think I feel good about them....

Maybe I'll start chapter five. Yes, due to the overhaul and everything shifting around, I now have four chapters done instead of three.

Comments

[ladyamberjo.livejournal.com]

I'm inclined to think that if YOU feel good about your fic, that's the most important thing. Better products tend to result when you write for yourself first and other people second.

HEY HEY GUESS WHAT I'M TYPING THIS FROM MY LAPTOP DAD FIXED THE CORD I DIDN'T HAVE TO BUY A WHOLE NEW POWER SUPPLY! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

**nodnod.** Definitely true. ^^ I still did have a few doubts, though, in which case I usually need other people to like it before I can start feeling fully alright about it. And then one person who doesn't can upset the apple cart.

YAY! ^O^

[northeastwind.livejournal.com]

Yep, if you feel better, that's definitely a good thing ^^ I like the changes, too-- things don't happen in such a hurry now. LOL.

XD Wow, that's a lot of chapters to not be posting! Welp, now the only way you'll be delayed is if your internet access goes out for some reason. Knock on wood.

[insaneladybug.livejournal.com]

Yeah. ^^ Mostly I'm relieved that now Autor only gets justifiably angry later. I'd originally wanted that, but I thought *that* would make Fakir look worse. Overall, though, I think it ended up looking better for both of them.

I'm halfway through chapter five now! One chapter will go up over the weekend, but there will be one little delay in getting the others up: I'm posting a squeefic on Monday.